Second attempt is a lot better.
When I do vertical up it's always been open root with 6010, but that's besides the point. And I do it on pipe, so it's actually a 5G... but anyways.
I would say ideally, you should be doing it in 3 passes. Root, fill, cap. The single fill weave should be laying down enough metal to get you just under flush... about 1/16th to 3/32.. maybe not as much as 3/32 but in that range. Tighten your weave up so you're keeping the tip of the rod in the top 3rd of the puddle (you know what I mean when I say puddle, right? Not being rude, just trying to clarify). I usually pause on the sides long enough to say "One Mississippi" in my head and zip over to the other side for another pause. You don't really want to "zip" or "whip" across the center, but don't hover or hesitate either. Just a straight shot, edge-hold, edge-hold, and repeat.
It looks like you've done a pretty good job of it on the thicker plate. But you aren't pausing quite long enough on the edges to let the metal fill in. Watch the edge of the rod where it meets the bevel and you'll see it undercut, and then fill in. This happens fast so don't dawdle. Once you see it fill in, weave on over to the other edge and repeat. I find a very tight Z weave is easier to do for me in this situation. Other people do a U motion. The only time I do that is when I tie in to the crater. It helps make it look seamless. If you start a Z weave at a tie in you'll have a low spot where you just cut across the gap instead of filling in the entire crater.
Well that was a long post for a little bit of information. Listen to DSW. Just pause longer on the edges. If you're reading the puddle you can see it fill in and know it's time to move. Keep your eyes open and don't get distracted by the arc.